VN - Ren'Py - School Basket Buddies [S2 Ep. 3] [Rrb3d]

never laughed so much with a game or novel
the part where the boys tried to persuade the coach to participate in a surprise party for the new one was brilliant. seriously had to recover from laughing for 5 minutes
nice story lines and handsome guys

It's not terrible, but it's not good. The voice acting is decent, but the writing is incoherent. The VA's are reading the lines word-for-word with terrible grammar and numerous typos--presumably, the dev gave them a script without proofreading. I encountered several texture bugs with character models' clothes; the MC model in general has unnerving, bulging eyes like a goldfish. The dev might have a fart fetish, as well as a pissing fetish; there are numerous scenes with this content--not what I signed up for when I became a patron. There is a plot, which is nice. But the sloppiness of each update is disappointing. Wouldn't recommend it.